You sure packed a ton of world-building into this story! Very, very impressive. I love how you've redrawn Eliot, Parker, and Sophie, and I really like Eliot's Grandfather.
I'm am really impressed with what you've written here, and thank you very much!
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Date: 2011-12-21 03:13 am (UTC)From:I'm am really impressed with what you've written here, and thank you very much!